Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to express my dissatisfaction about one of the products that I bought through your website 1 week ago.
To begin with, I bought a microwave after the site had announced a 30 % discount on all kitchen electronic devices. When I asked the customer service about which brand is the best, I was told that Black&Decker is the most reliable one. Consequently, I ordered one of them immediately so as to not miss the discount.
Unfortunately, when I used the microwave to heat a small meal, not only was it not as hot as expected, but it also caught an unpleasant odor. Furthermore, a peculiar loud sound is produced during the heating process which indicates the existence of a manufacturing flaw.
On the account of the fact that the device is not working properly within the first week, I ask the company to make a full refund in the pursuance of compensating me for this unpleasant experience. Finally, if the company ignored my ticket, I would share my experience on social media which would be extremely deleterious for your site's reputation.
Thanks a lot for your consideration
Yours faithfully,
Mark Ryan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ntly, I ordered one of them immediately so as to not miss the discount. Unfortunately...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, well, as to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 204.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84803921569 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01090621185 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.3857648188 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 16.8248392259 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 4.34317383033 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198392124421 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638894368573 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0505917227852 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0995984948739 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669679444247 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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