In a cashless society, people use more credit cards. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this phenomenon?
Recently, the phenomenon of utilizing the credit cards and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although this issue is beneficial as it is regarded by the substantial number of individuals both constructive and positive, others hold opponent views. I am inclined to believe that the cashless communities can be plus as it could develop some brilliant aspects for its adherents.
From a social standpiont, utilizing the electronic cards can provide the society some noticeable effectswhich are rooted in the fact of modern banking. From my own experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered these merits. Firstly, the cashless transactions do not need to papers to manufacture the money and its outcome is declining the cut trees. Furthermore, the rate of thefts will be diminished due to this system is well-secured. Moreover, credit cards do not need to be changed and waste will be declined and the effeciency will be riased by this system.
On the one hand, there is no doubt the cashless nation has some opponents. They asserted that this idea highly depends on electricity, Internet, software and hardware systems and they might work badly. As a tangible example, some research undertaken by a prestigious university demonstrated that the cashless transactions have vulnurability to hack and they might have risks.
To conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of replacinng money and cash by debit cards are far more outweigh their drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 326, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'paper'.
Suggestion: paper
...he cashless transactions do not need to papers to manufacture the money and its outcom...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, well, while, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 10.5418719212 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 6.10837438424 164% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 31.9359605911 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1207.87684729 111% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35458167331 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08018890483 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 139.433497537 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621513944223 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 416.7 379.143842365 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.4228785822 50.4703680194 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 104.977214359 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 7.25397266985 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.118392919029 0.242375264174 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403088011807 0.0925447433944 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0245139924238 0.071462118173 34% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0645027342798 0.151781067708 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230079262217 0.0609392437508 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.32886699507 121% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 55.0591133005 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.94827586207 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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