Advertising is all around us, it is an unavoidable part of everyone’s life. Some people say that advertising is a positive part of our lives while others say it is a negative one. Discuss both views and include your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Advertisement has become an inevitable part for most of the people. Some people argue that it leaves a positive impression on their lives while other’s state that it has more disadvantages. In this essay, I will contend both views in detail and try to give my rational opinion.
No doubt, promotion has an advantage for both people and businesses. Firstly, it provides awareness to the people about new services, equipments, sales and convenience products. For example, on Boxing Day, people get pamphlets from different stores where they can compare price and configuration options before buying...
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Sentence: For example, from two stores of same products, people would more prefer to shop from an advertised store than another one.
Description: The fragment more prefer to is rare
Sentence: They just excuse that they have seen promotional product of that particular store and hence it might be a best choice for them.
Description: The token a is not usually followed by an adjective, superlative
Suggestion: Refer to a and best
Sentence: To conclude, commercial have both positive and negative impact on mental status of a person.
Description: An adjective is not usually followed by a verb 'to have', uninflected present tense, infinitive or
Suggestion: Refer to commercial and have
Sentence: However, its advantages outweigh disadvantages due to the fact that in this hectic lifestyle, awareness and knowledge of market products and services is more necessary than to have a dumb attitude towards that.
Description: The fragment products and services is not usually followed by is
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace is with are
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Score: 7.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
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Average Word Length: 5.077 4.6
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