You were hurt in a minor accident inside a supermarket, and you wish to complain
to the supermarket. Write a letter to the manager of the supermarket .in your letter
Say who you are
Give details about the accident
Suggest how the supermarket could prevent similar accidents
My name is Pip Depp and I am the same who got hurt in an accident in your supermarket. I am writing to complain about the unattended corner of the supermarket.
Let me explain you the situation first. I am talking about the corner that directs to the car park on its left and comes through a small gallery of just 7 meters wise. While going through the gallery, I noticed that the floor was wet and believe me I was carefully taking my steps. When I reached to the corner, from opposite side one pregnant lady hit me with her trolley and due to slippery floow I fell down and unconscious at that ti...
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and I am the same who got hurt
and I am the one who got hurt
Let me explain you the situation first.
Let me explain to you the situation first.
Sentence: When I reached to the corner, from opposite side one pregnant lady hit me with her trolley and due to slippery floow I fell down and unconscious at that time.
Error: floow Suggestion: floor
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 246 200
No. of Characters: 1039 1000
No. of Different Words: 139 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.96 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.224 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.266 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 58 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 44 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 11 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 17.571 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.481 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.643 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.369 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.609 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.177 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 4