Happiness is essential in human's life whether it is a teenager or a grown up adult. Happiness makes a man stronger and leads a healthy life. Why one should strive for that? Some people states younger generations are more happy compared to adults despite of more responsibility.
Crossing their childhood, they land to teenage where less responsibility and more freedom were given to them. This is the place where most of the parents are worried about, as they didn't get the maturity levels to think on their own as wells as every step plays in this span guides their future. Restriction by parents to these age group doesn't matter at all to lead a happy life.Teenage is really a god gift as they can enjoy to the core where no responsibilities were given other than studying.Younger generations has a tendency to go to pubs, enjoy weekends fulfilling their long awaited plans and many more,even today's generations are not an exemption.
Certain demographics state that adults life brings more happiness compared to that of teenagers. Although keeping their responsibilities aside they even try to enjoy themselves by arranging family get togetherness or meeting a old friend for party. The real happiness for adults by chasing their dreams, fulfilling wife, children's as well as their parents needs and dreams.These people will have sharing their sad and happy moments with their immediate family members.
I think even if it is younger or adult generations happiness is necessary in everyone's life. As people are running after their life, the future generations even forget what is happiness and that the reason many yoga or meditation centers are formed to make you learn how to feel happy. Let's plan ourselves keeping all the pressure, tension, stress aside and lets taste the real happiness and share it to the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, well, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32055749129 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.40101457932 2.80592935109 121% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602787456446 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 71.0 20.2975951904 350% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 135.353934187 49.4020404114 274% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 381.75 106.682146367 358% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 71.75 20.7667163134 346% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164654721073 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112021496887 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0414617047425 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112021496887 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414617047425 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 39.5 13.0946893788 302% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -9.05 50.2224549098 -18% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.2 11.3001002004 285% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.76 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.73 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.4 10.1190380762 300% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.