There is vital role of employees for a business to notch success on a competitive market thus accomplishment of workers can have a great influence on the achievements of association. This essay would delineate that how can an organization escalate the employees output.
At the outset, I would like to stress upon the point that strikes to my mind is that superior environment on work place is entirely devote the better outcome from employees because if they have all facilities as well as equipments that are required then they do toil for company. Additionally, an ideal behavior of employer towards workers is very beneficial for corporation because if owner encourage, appreciate the workers and give rewards when organisation grow due to the performance of employees then they give priority to work.
Leaping further, another point that crucial for increasing the output of staff is that employer should not give the excess stress regarding work on employees therefore a monthly meeting definitely organise by company in which staff can discuss every problem about work as well as owner should rise the knowledge regarding work so that an organization can get profit from all aspects. Moreover, promotion and remuneration of workers can not be denying because if they are satisfied from job then they work properly.
To cap it all, it can not irrefutable fact that employees performance is the major part for the growth of an association. Hence, employer should always aware about faculty's problems and mitigate them with a better manner.
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Essay evaluation report
1. You may improve your vocabulary words, look:
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
2. don't duplicate content, like:
At the outset, I would like to stress upon the point that strikes to my mind is that....
Leaping further, another point that crucial for increasing the output of staff is that ...
To cap it all, it can not irrefutable fact that...
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'devoted'.
Suggestion: devoted
...r environment on work place is entirely devote the better outcome from employees becau...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s then they give priority to work. Leaping further, another point that cruc...
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Line 7, column 441, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ion and remuneration of workers can not be denying because if they are satisfied from job ...
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Line 9, column 49, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...t all, it can not irrefutable fact that employees performance is the major part for the g...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, moreover, regarding, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20717131474 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88203437263 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573705179283 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.956304034 49.4020404114 198% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.375 106.682146367 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.375 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189970467284 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786546230337 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0542216777635 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111196339856 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490888947025 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.53 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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