Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, but other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen at TV and the internet. Discuss both opinions and give your own opinion
Tourism is significantly increasing over the past few years. One of the most debated issues of the society is whether it is essential to gain knowledge by travelling to different nations whilst this is doable as all the relevant information can be watched on television and internet . I shall discuss both the views and then state my own perspective.
On the one hand, nowadays, all the data are available at a click of a button and various documentaries are showcased on television. This gives people freedom to watch them at leisure and seek detailed knowledge from multiple sources .Moreover, this saves an enormous amount of money, time and energy. Also, people can connect on various social networking sites and forums to seek data. For instance, CNBC travel is a dedicated channel where they travel to different parts of the world to learn about their day to day life . Thus it ,is seen why this view is gaining support.
On the other hand, to learn about a nation one must travel. Firstly, visiting a country provides a deep connection with the locals and insights about their heritage, customs and traditions. As this will be first hand information there will be no discrepancy and will be useful in research. Secondly, one can relish different cuisines which are prepared in an authentic traditional way which otherwise is not possible .Thirdly, countries are diversified with different states and each state has its own uniqueness to be experienced in terms of history, social culture and lifestyle. To illustrate, these days Homestays are gaining popularity as tourists are benefited by not only getting a comfortable stay at their house but also a chance to interact and connect deeply. As seen in the light, visiting any nation creates a positive impact on learning.
To recapitulate, despite there are convincing arguments on both the sides of the debate, relying on available material through various mediums such as television and internet will be the biggest mistake, from my viewpoint, I agree that personal experience is superior as it builds a strong connection with people, to enjoy a different variety of food ,culture , traditions as well as observe their unity in diversity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, well, as to, for instance, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1845.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09668508287 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83611801533 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593922651934 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 98.4939028006 49.4020404114 199% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.0 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1333333333 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4 7.06120827912 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186218575734 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602260575528 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504512176479 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105816027216 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418891863954 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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