Nowadays, an increasing number of people choose to migrate to another country to enjoy their retire lives. In this essay, I would discuss the reason of the trend and provide potential consequences.
After an engaging life, people are tired of living in the original country surrounded by the same air and environment. They tend to be introduced to a completely different culture and want to face new challenges in an unknown world. Moving abroad would be an opportunity to experience a whole new life. The trend is inevitable; therefore, more and more countries provide resorts for the people after their retirement. For example, they might be arranged to a sunny beach and served with all kinds of outdoors activities such as scuba diving or mountain climbing. They love to experience things they did not have time to do during their earlier life.
This trend brings the tourism industry in plenty of countries to boom. Hawaii, for instance, is famous for its beach and resorts. People can enjoy various water activities there. Furthermore, this trend can also recover economy in a country. Greece suffered an economic crisis in 2008. Apart from fiscal strategy, it was because of the relics and historical structures in ancient times that made the economic situation in Greece to thrive again. The money that people spent in their accommodations, restaurants and shops was like a funding to Greece. With the money from tourists, the elderly in particular, Greece can provide better services to those who want to enjoy their lives after the retirement. It is a double win situation.
In conclusion, after a struggling life, people tend to seize their remaining time to experience things that they have not tried before. And from the economic perspective, this trend not only brings pleasure to the elderly, but also boosts the economy in other countries.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, therefore, apart from, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10130718954 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70804632299 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552287581699 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.9561636643 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.1578947368 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1052631579 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26315789474 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265508709642 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725891027251 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576890080559 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161883007867 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415248066855 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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