In many countries people tend to move overseas or move to a different part of their country after their retirement. Discuss why they do so and what the outcome of this situation is. Provide specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
It is true that there is a tendency among people of retirement age towards living in different places and countries rather than their habitual home. Reasons for this vary, and it would result in some issues.
The main reason why a number of people of retirement age choose to change their places to another region is that they want to experience a new lifestyle. Working adults often spend decades of their lifetime staying in the same city as their jobs’ requirements and the fact that their children need a stable environment. Over the years they might feel their lives mundane and predictable. Therefore, after they retire and no longer have to shoulder the responsibility of parenting, they have free time of their own and many choose to discover a new life in a new place that different from what they used to live for a long time. For example, my uncle, who is now one year away from his retirement, is eagerly planning his move to Dalat - a highland area to the South of Vietnam – as the tranquil pace of life there is more suitable for him than the busy life he now has in Hanoi.
One outcome the aforementioned trend might bring is that it would lighten the liability to take care the elder in some regions but exacerbate the overload of health care systems in some other areas. As mentioned above, Dalat seems to be an ideal place for the elder, but it at the same time is confronted by the issue of overloaded health care centres. In case people move to other countries, the issue of an outward flow of money could emerge. Since when people move to another country, they cause an outflow of assets and capital which is considered a factor that weakens the national economy.
In conclusion, many people choose to move to different places after their retirement in order to change their ordinary lifestyle and this may lead to a number of problem such as the imbalance of between demand and supply of healthcare system or the outflow of nation’s wealth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... highland area to the South of Vietnam – as the tranquil pace of life there is mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68767908309 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53162205001 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541547277937 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.756252274 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.333333333 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0833333333 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256145970981 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0903589802408 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530096627384 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154670500449 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499297152998 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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