nowadays, more and more people decide to have children later in their life. What are the the reasons? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
It is true that nowadays many couples have delayed parenthood until a later time of their life. There are some reasons for this tendency and in my opinion, the drawbacks of this are eclipsed by the benefits that it might bring.
The main the reason why people are tending to have children at a later stage of life is that they have some concerns of more priority before they have babies. Having children means that parents have to spend a considerable amount of time for their family, which would in some cases impede their chances of career progression. Due to the fact that competition in labor market is now more intense than the past, young people have to work long hours to keep their job and get promotion. Thus they do not have much time for raising kids (building a family) and consequently decide to have kids when they already have a stable career. Another reason is that bringing up children requires good financial conditions as the cost of living and the prices of education are on the increase. Therefore people prefer to wait until they have an adequate financial accumulation to provide their children.
The trend towards raising a family later in life entails both advantages and its downsides. Many people concerns that this would widen the gap between generations and leads to the situation wherein parents find it more difficult to understand and communicate with their children. Besides, some health problems are more likely to occur to an aged pregnant woman than a younger one. However, I believe the advantages of this trend are far more greater. As mentioned above, Parents may see the benefit of this trend as their career progressions are not interrupted by having a child. In addition, children of experienced and matured parents are received better upbringing and stable financial support.
In conclusion, many couples choose to delay having babies to focus on their career and accumulate an adequate financial condition and it is generally beneficial for them and their children as well.
- Task 2: many museums charge for admission while others are freeDo you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweight the disadvantages 73
- People living in large cities today face many problems in their everyday life. What are these problems? Should governments encourage people to move to smaller regional towns? 89
- Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for travellers? 84
- Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory To what extent do you agree 73
- Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is?What could be done to encourage more peo 96
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 485, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...rs to keep their job and get promotion. Thus they do not have much time for raising ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 779, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...rices of education are on the increase. Therefore people prefer to wait until they have a...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'greater' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: greater
...ve the advantages of this trend are far more greater. As mentioned above, Parents may see th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, in some cases, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97935103245 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56806982776 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525073746313 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4987323717 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.533333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398685556048 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130872508738 0.084324248473 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0596927072307 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221935606383 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825709232851 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.