An old friend of yours is coming to visit your city. You had planned to meet him at the airport,
but something has come up and you will not be able to make it there on time.
Write to your friend. In your letter
• Explain the situation
• Offer to make alternate arrangements
Dear Beck,
Hope you are doing well. I am excited to hear that you are coming to visit Ajmer on Friday but unfortunately, I won’t be able to pick you from the airport as communicated earlier due to some official commitments. Let me explain in detail.
To elucidate I had applied for a full day leave to pick you from the airport and then take you to various tourist attractions spots but unfortunately, a delegation of customers from Japan is visiting our office. Since I am the technical head my presence is required during the business meeting. Although I tried to my best to skip the meeting however the company management needs me inside the meeting for a couple of hours.
As a part of an alternative arrangement, I will send my driver to the airport who will be waiting for you at the arrival lounge. Additionally, he will be accompanying you to some alluring tourist spots like Mouse Maharani Fort, Bala Fort. By the time you finish these two places, I will be free and will meet you at City Centre where we can have traditional Rajasthan cuisine. Later on, we can cover other attraction spots like Salasar Lake, City Museum.
I hope all the arrangements are acceptable. Once again I apologize for any inconvenience caused.
Warm wishes
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 213, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mers from Japan is visiting our office. Since I am the technical head my presence is ...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, then, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1049.0 937.175257732 112% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76818181818 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85090604708 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645454545455 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 340.2 290.88556701 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8590059366 44.8134815571 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6923076923 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.15384615385 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201467564651 0.216113520407 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582859352821 0.0766984524023 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0603341053561 0.0603063233224 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105738347502 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701521877286 0.0580467560999 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.