which one do you prefer before taking a vacation?
Reading about places online or discussing them with someone who has visited the proposed places.
Nowadays many people are interested in taking vacation on their holidays. They spend much money to visit new places in order to have a great time with their families. Given that the high expenditures of traveling, it is crucial to find a good destination which worth to spend time and money. But how do we find an appropriate place as a destination? There is no shortage of opinion on whether reading about places online or discussing them with someone who has visited the proposed places. Considering the increasingly extensive use of internet and online websites, some people are in favor of reading about the places online, others opine that online websites are not precise sources to rely on. In my opinion, discussing about places with someone who has visited there is more accurate than searching them online. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following paragraphs.
First of all, the main purpose of most of online websites is to make money and advertisement. They exaggerate in telling the features of a place and try to show it more beautiful and attractive than what it is in real. Moreover, online sources usually just write about good points of a place and they don't take to account its bad and weak points. My personal experience is a good example of this. Some years ago, I read about one of my country's city on internet. There were such interesting and attracting features of city that I became interested in visiting that city. It was written that this place has many interesting historical buildings, good weather, many stores and kind people. How much more I explore the internet, I became more enthusiastic to travel there. Finally, I visit there and found that all the things I had read on the websites just were advertisement and any of them were not accurate. For example, the weather of the city was really dry which made me feel headache all time I was there. There were just two or three historical buildings which were out of city and in mountains without a suitable road to drive and get there. As a result, I was disappointed and decided to come back earlier than I planned. If it weren't for the wrong information of the online websites, I wouldn't have had this bad experience.
The second reason for my opinion is that individual's experiences are more reliable. People usually consider same factors in their decisions. For example, many peoples' main concern before planning for taking a vacation is its expenses. Asking about expenses related to a certain place from people's who have visited there is a good source which is more close to reality in compare with online websites which try to underestimate the costs or inform about some discounts without any precise details of condition about getting those discounts, and as a passenger arrived there, they used to excuse that the date for getting discount is over and you are not eligible. It's certainly clear to see why I don't believe online information about the costs of travelling to certain place. For instance, before my travel to India, I can't forget how accurate details of expenditures one of my friends who had visited there told me. If I only relied on the online pages, I couldn't have afforded all my travel expenses.
To conclude, though some may prefer to explore the online websites to get information about their places of destination, after analyzing both sides of argument, I strongly believe that people's experiences are much reliable to take into account because they don’t advertise and have a more real estimation of the costs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, may, moreover, really, second, so, thus, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 13.8261648746 152% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 11.0286738351 172% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 43.0788530466 144% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 85.0 52.1666666667 163% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.0752688172 198% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2960.0 1977.66487455 150% => OK
No of words: 612.0 407.700716846 150% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83660130719 4.8611393121 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.97379470361 4.48103885553 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6577489297 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 212.727598566 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455882352941 0.524837075471 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 975.6 618.680645161 158% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1314796988 48.9658058833 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.068965517 100.406767564 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1034482759 20.6045352989 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86206896552 5.45110844103 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.88709677419 246% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361236387359 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847895067529 0.076458572812 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103333962035 0.0737576698707 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2166479992 0.150856017488 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.1251906561 0.0645574589148 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 86.8835125448 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 10.002688172 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Write the essay in 30 minutes.
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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