Some people believe that despite widespread the social media and internet, the traditional newspaper hold the most vital position in new readers. It appears to me, this idea, nowadays, is rather absurd for some major reasons which will be discussed in detail.
At the first thing that attracts people to read news on the online sources of media their easy access. With the emergence of internet, the people in over the world can access numerous news through smart devices such as mobile, tablet and ….
Actually, at recent decades, For example, a terrorism attack would be update on different channels like CNN, BBC, Instagram and Facebook at the same time. By contrast, with prolonging the production process like editing and printing, the traditional newspaper might not able to compete with internet in terms of the updating speed.
Secondly, in my point of view, the internet can take over the position of printed newspaper because of the new experience it bring to readers. Also, the traditional newspaper cannot to convey visual message to the people who interested read news on regular. Another key benefit of online news compete with printed news is the ability to share articles and discuss with others about this.
From another angle, newspapers will continue to be a vital source of information, even in the Internet age. The most rational argument in favor of this assertion is that the newspaper still the most traditional means of communicating the news and used by many people. For instance, old humans or People who do not have the ability to use the Internet. Finally, many people like the experience of holding and reading a paper rather than looking at the computer screen.
In conclusion, I disagree with the view that newspapers will continue to be the main source of news, because I believe that more people will be drawn use the internet and social media.
Some people believe that despite widespread the social media and internet, the traditional newspaper hold the most vital position in new readers. It appears to me, this idea, nowadays, is rather absurd for some major reasons which will be discussed in detail.
At the first thing that attracts people to read news on the online sources of media their easy access. With the emergence of internet, the people in over the world can access numerous news through smart devices such as mobile, tablet and ….
Actually, at recent decades, For example, a terrorism attack would be update on different channels like CNN, BBC, Instagram and Facebook at the same time. By contrast, with prolonging the production process like editing and printing, the traditional newspaper might not able to compete with internet in terms of the updating speed.
Secondly, in my point of view, the internet can take over the position of printed newspaper because of the new experience it bring to readers. Also, the traditional newspaper cannot to convey visual message to the people who interested read news on regular. Another key benefit of online news compete with printed news is the ability to share articles and discuss with others about this.
From another angle, newspapers will continue to be a vital source of information, even in the Internet age. The most rational argument in favor of this assertion is that the newspaper still the most traditional means of communicating the news and used by many people. For instance, old humans or People who do not have the ability to use the Internet. Finally, many people like the experience of holding and reading a paper rather than looking at the computer screen.
In conclusion, I disagree with the view that newspapers will continue to be the main source of news, because I believe that more people will be drawn use the internet and social media.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 126, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...spaper because of the new experience it bring to readers. Also, the traditional newsp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, finally, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1583.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0253968254 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52566368947 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.536507936508 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.114561555 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 113.071428571 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.57142857143 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.452116486502 0.244688304435 185% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159011990573 0.084324248473 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.178270375527 0.0667982634062 267% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270328269795 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.306800070606 0.056905535591 539% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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