Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choice on everyday matters (such as food,clothes and entertainment) is likely result in a society of individual who only think about their own whishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decesion about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
In current time, Every single person want their position on top so they did not exchange ideas to others. Some people believe that they should not interact with their pupils routine life while remaining are think that they discuss all matters to the children. It means parents does not allowing children to make decisions regarding their future. I discuss both the views further and also give my opinion at the end.
To start with, First part of statement is every youngster should take some steps without consulting with parents or any other guardian. For example pupils are free to choose cloths whichever they like same as in food they eat whatever they want. Another thing is children become an independent and know how to survive in certain circumstances also their knowledge and experience increased due to analysing the information in which they want to take decisions.
Secondly, Apart from that some individuals are says that if youngster take decisions by them selves there are more chances of mistakes and due to this they suffer from many problems in future. Another thing is children has no more choice so they started conversations with their friends and family members to decision making. Many time it happens pupils suffers from a mental stress if they take action in that period it increases chances of error. Thus some individuals think that they discuss all matters to the children who takes decision by them selves.
After all, we discuss both the views above is seems that both the side has equal important as well as limitations. So I believe that it is depend upon the matter that pupils have to make some actions but it advisory to keep watch their actions by their parents and other legal person.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, thus, well, while, after all, another thing, apart from, as to, for example, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1438.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90784982935 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37148077595 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57337883959 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6215827862 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.615384615 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5384615385 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0769230769 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216457219894 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0817304823192 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723370377129 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139832823313 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049179777217 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.