It is argued that art is regarded as an important subject and it should be taught to all students in school. In my opinion, studying art is great because it can improve creativity and children can express their feelings through drawings.
Art is not taught for the purpose of becoming an artist, but for upgrading their creative power. A variety of careers are based on drawing, such as engineering, carpentering, making sculptures and even inventions are based on art. As being familiar with art since childhood can support their future careers, it is necessary to teach this subject in schools.
Art is a way of expression. If a child is given a pencil and a sheet of paper, he or she will start drawing rather than writing. Since children doesn’t know much words, they describe their emotions via drawings. For example, pediatric psychologists study children by letting them draw what is in their mind, stating that it is more effective than question and answer section in order to realize their feelings. By this term, adults, especially teachers and parents, can know the children’s emotions and nurture them according to their needs.
As a conclusion, students should learn art as a compulsory subject in school for their creative mind. Moreover, they can spend their leisure time with art. Therefore, I think teaching art to children should not be considered as a mere extra-curriculum activity.
- In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry.Why is this the case?What can be done about this problem? 73
- Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 163, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
...iting. Since children doesn't know much words, they describe their emotions via...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, i think, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1189.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10300429185 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89099680913 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605150214592 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 342.9 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6787394818 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.4615384615 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9230769231 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182535286613 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0721068346998 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462751442298 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127199625191 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507299570912 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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