Improvements in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer
nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for
helping the poorer nations in such areas.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Advancements in some aspects such health, trade and education are absolutely pivotal for the enhancement of developing states. Nevertheless, developing nations are supposed to be assisted by developed country in several areas. In accordance with these arguments, this essay will explain my perspective in the following paragraphs.
In regard to the issue, I do appreciate to the statement which believed that destitute nation need an enormous improvement in their various sectors. Nonetheless, I strongly agree to the argument which thought that prosperous countries have to render an aid to economically deprived states in order to make developing countries having a positive progress.
In accordance with my points of view above, I tend to think that there are two kinds of aid that wealthy nations are able to bestow for developing states. Developed nations, first and foremost, are capable of conferring financial aid in order to make impoverished country having a grow enhancement and, admittedly, not a drop improvement. Second but not less crucial, they, wealthy country, are able to invest their various investment to poorer states. According to this investment, this endeavour definitely will help destitute country since it is capable of giving a new opportunity for giving a new job to their citizen who does not have any occupations. Last but not least, they can persuade developing country to make a cooperation which is able to give a positive feedback for both countries.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the progression of impoverished countries is vitally important for making them having a growth advancement in numerous aspects. Therefore, in order to make it being real, assisting economically deprived nations are supposed to be done by wealthy states.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'positive progress'.
Suggestion: positive progress
...der to make developing countries having a positive progress. In accordance with my points of vie...
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Line 5, column 280, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...der to make impoverished country having a grow enhancement and, admittedly, not a drop...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, in regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1512.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38078291815 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08300505197 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555160142349 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1317955071 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 7.06120827912 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151775767201 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635949783255 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571261119465 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102656669532 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554112037 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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