Government is supposed to benefit the public and work as an administration department. The main goal of its work contains both economic progress and other types of progress such as city construction and health-care. As far as I concern, other aims are equally important as economic progress.
As the figure for GDP stands for something, many people believe that the most important goal is to make economic progress. Obviously, a city under good economic status is likely to offer a better life to citizens. However, I would rather take the other opinion because there are more things to care about besides economic development. Our happiness does not depend on money only, and it is determined by many invisible conditions that we can feel every day. If a government gains great economic progress, the improvement can reflect on its report but may not work on citizens. What is more, the quality of life will not be secured under a poor health-care system. On the opposite, if citizens do not need to worry about the environment, health and housing, then money does not seem so useful to them.
Clinton, the ex-president of America, once said that the figure of economic progress cannot represent happiness. Breathing fresh air arises our sense of happiness, and receiving high quality education enhances our sense of happiness, so will enjoying good foods do. These feelings could not be replaced by increasing economic figures. After all, we live in a world measured not only in economic method.
All in all, government should stress on offering good lives rather than improving economic status only. There are more things beyond money that matter to life.
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- Many government think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. 61
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to AshdownMuseum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.Summar 78
- The table below shows the numbers of visitors to AshdownMuseum during the year before and the year after it was refurbished. The charts show the result of surveys asking visitors how satisfied they were with their visit, during the same two periods.Summar 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...qually important as economic progress. As the figure for GDP stands for somethi...
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...money does not seem so useful to them. Clinton, the ex-president of America, on...
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...nhances our sense of happiness, so will enjoying good foods do. These feelings could not...
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...we live in a world measured not only in economic method. All in all, government shou...
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... measured not only in economic method. All in all, government should stress on ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, may, so, then, after all, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05090909091 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71418435155 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596363636364 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1385334902 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.8125 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248162621369 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814209992272 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0937660737072 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146448468399 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100268715909 0.056905535591 176% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.71 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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