In the past decade, we have witnessed the rise of numerous successful entrepreneurs world over. Proponents are debating over this phenomenon, Many argue that there has been a significant influence of the regions they operate due to ecosystem advantages, however, others have opposite views stating that they are successful due to their hard work and intelligence, and there is no role of the place in their growth. In this article, I will analyze both the side before expressing my opinion.
To begin with, there is no doubt that regions hold paramount importance in the success of an individual. First, certain places are more suitable for specialty businesses, wherein anybody can be successful without putting many efforts. For instance, The silicon valley in the United States of America has given top-notch successful people in the are of information technology due to the most suitable ecosystem, policies and supporting culture.
On the other hand, we have seen many extremely successful persons almost reaching the mountains at any place in the world. They have reached the top due to their habits of hardworking and growth mindset. For example, Sir Richard Branson is not only successful in one business in England only but he has ventured and embraced mammoth success worldwide.
In conclusion, in my opinion from the above examples, it is evident that, although a region may have many benefits and key contributor for the success of a person, their personality traits are of equal importance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...as given top-notch successful people in the are of information technology due to the mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, no doubt, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1270.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 243.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22633744856 5.00649968141 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82943882416 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.580463131201 108% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.4216127962 50.4703680194 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 104.977214359 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3 20.9669160288 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.25397266985 183% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216052434918 0.242375264174 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0789086820721 0.0925447433944 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644669797455 0.071462118173 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139046957352 0.151781067708 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055509746075 0.0609392437508 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 11.5310837438 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.32886699507 114% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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