Recently, we have witnessed tremendous attraction toward extreme sports worldwide. Experts are debating over this growing phenomena. Proponents are of the view that taking part in such sporting activities and events have paramount advantages thus should be promoted, however, others have opposite views stating that it is too risky and have detrimental effects hence should be prohibited. In this article, I will discuss both the side before giving my view.
To begin with, for participating in extreme sports like skiing, water rafting, dirt racing and many more, required real guts. It is not everyone’s cup of tea. Taking part in such sports, install brave mindset and make a participant strong willed. Moreover, regular practice is also a great way of physical exercise for being fit and healthy. For instance, all the extreme sportspersons are always in good shape with excellent physics.
On the other hand, there are many disadvantages of such sports as well, first of all, they are exorbitantly expensive, due to which not all section of the society can take part, gears and equipment are costly as well. Furthermore, if not done with proper care and guide, such sports can be fatal and dangerous. For example, there was a deadly accident during recent expenditure on one of the famous mountains, where one student died due to falling.
In conclusion, from the above example, it is evident that if done carefully extreme sports can be a boon for mankind, otherwise can be turned in to ban.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 10.5418719212 161% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 247.0 242.827586207 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13765182186 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75349484157 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.65991902834 0.580463131201 114% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.7473183473 50.4703680194 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.6153846154 104.977214359 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3076923077 7.25397266985 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217710396362 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642195721836 0.0925447433944 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698771415399 0.071462118173 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125023998554 0.151781067708 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385069375863 0.0609392437508 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 12.6369458128 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.1260098522 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 55.0591133005 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.94827586207 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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