In the past century, we have witnessed an enormous amount of innovations and inventions in the area of medicine, transportation and information technology. All these inventions touched and impacted mankind tremendously. Proponents are debating the most important invention for the past 100 years, among antibiotics, the airplane, and computers. While all this invention's core aim is to bring convenience to the people, I think the computer is the most significant invention among all. Let’s discuss some of the major advantages of computers in the following article.
To begin with, the computer is a marvelous technological invention which has paramount impacts on both personal and professional aspects of society. We can hardly imagine any economic or social sector working without the computers, it's capabilities to calculate complex financial calculation and ability to manage huge inventories cannot be matched by any other tools. It not only can predict the weather but also helpful in the education section. It can process and save a mammoth growth of data.
Moreover, due to development in the area of artificial intelligence and machine learning computers are expected to replace human labor for many mundane tasks. For example, nowadays most of the banking transactions and airline tickets are booked online with the help of computers.
In conclusion, from the above example, it is evident that although, medicine and airplane have a significant contribution in the advancement of the 21st century, however, computers are still going to rule the world it will remain the same for many more years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 20.9802955665 52% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 31.9359605911 113% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 251.0 242.827586207 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.46215139442 5.00649968141 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 3.92707691288 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06172123461 2.71678728327 113% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 139.433497537 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645418326693 0.580463131201 111% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 379.143842365 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2182873406 50.4703680194 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.25 104.977214359 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9166666667 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.25397266985 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273247181261 0.242375264174 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917243753207 0.0925447433944 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127768050417 0.071462118173 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132117374605 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11937706832 0.0609392437508 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 12.6369458128 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.1260098522 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.9458128079 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 11.5310837438 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 55.0591133005 151% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.94827586207 90% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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