The 18th century due to industrialization a lot of people migrate to developing countries. This affected lifestyle and increased major problems in developed countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

We have witnessed mammoth migration from underdeveloped countries to the industrialized nations due to enormous opportunities and better living conditions host nation has to offer. Moreover, recent disturbing issues between migrants and the local population has sparked heated argument amount the expert in this area. Proponents are debating these phenomena, many say that it is a responsibility to host nation and its citizen to accept the poor migrants who have immigrated for pursuing their dreams. However, others have opposite view stating that it is the migrant community we need to adopt local culture and get attuned to it. In this article, I will discuss an approach from both the sides, before deriving an appropriate conclusion.

To begin with, when migrate arrives at the developed nation with their family, they come with a vivid dream and with long-term plan to settle down. However, after reaching there they are surprised by the bias behavior of local people with them. Many a time they do not get the right work, wages, and an appropriate work condition. Frustrated by such incidents they sometimes come within friction with local people. For instance, recently we have seen much news of trouble faced by a foreign migrant in the USA. Hence, it is a responsibility of local government, employers, and habitat to help migrant in settling down peacefully.

On the other hand, equal responsibility lies with a guest who is going to a developed nation, first, they should accept the local culture and social norms, instead of staying away from it. This will help them get familiar with the foreign citizen and make friendly rapport with them. For instance, migrants should learn their language, ways and participate in their festival.

In conclusion, in my view and from the above example, it is evident that it is the responsibility of both the parties and gives some time patiently for avoiding a hostile situation. Locals should help and make sure that guests are able to adapt their lifestyle in positive ways.

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Average: 1.1 (1 vote)
Essay Categories
PTE_Academic

Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 31.9359605911 160% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1705.0 1207.87684729 141% => OK
No of words: 332.0 242.827586207 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13554216867 5.00649968141 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.757093742 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 139.433497537 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572289156627 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 379.143842365 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5382617305 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.5625 104.977214359 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.9669160288 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5625 7.25397266985 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0631961531 0.242375264174 26% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0202207956055 0.0925447433944 22% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0209140614132 0.071462118173 29% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0374745732794 0.151781067708 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115387684014 0.0609392437508 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 11.5310837438 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 55.0591133005 169% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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