In the last decade, there has been a significant increase in global temperatures and the level of pollution due to the mammoth rise in the industrialization and urbanization. This has left a detrimental impact on climate change. Experts are debating over this phenomenon, where they are arguing roles and responsibilities of the government, however, others have opposite views stating that the role of industries, whose only aim is to generate maximum profit at the cost of the atmosphere. It this article, I will analyze both the sides before deriving an appropriate responsible authority.
To begin with, to cope with ever-rising temperatures and sea levels, that is a dangerous proposition for the planet’s ecosystem. First of all, we have witnessed a paramount increase in economic activities which led to massive deforestation. Many a time these business people do not follow rules and regulations imposed by federal agencies. For instance, although there are stricter emission laws for releasing toxic gases responsible for leading the greenhouse effects to the environments, many factories still dump severe chemical compositions into the air.
On the other hand, legislations are also not taking lawful actions against the parties not following the environmental laws. The Government must impose meaningful policies to eradicate the worst situations. For example, States should jail the owners of such industries who are not aligned with the environmental laws.
In conclusion, from the above examples, it is evident that for conversation of the earth for future generations, both government and industry will have to work holistically and cognitively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 31.9359605911 106% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1207.87684729 118% => OK
No of words: 254.0 242.827586207 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59448818898 5.00649968141 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.28497718137 2.71678728327 121% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 139.433497537 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673228346457 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 379.143842365 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.0451811571 50.4703680194 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.416666667 104.977214359 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4166666667 7.25397266985 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112862516329 0.242375264174 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0379698984546 0.0925447433944 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322443926861 0.071462118173 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0664343509088 0.151781067708 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0281423304813 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 12.6369458128 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 53.1260098522 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.5310837438 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.4 8.32886699507 125% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 55.0591133005 167% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.