many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result.Why do many working people not get enough exercise?What can be done about this problem?

There is no denying of the fact that health was given least importance by the people nowadays. This is a matter of grave concern. Many people believe that physical workout should be a part of our daily routine. I accord with this view. I shall outline the underlying causes and will suggest some remedial measures to mitigate this problem.
Most preponderant reason for neglecting health by working people is because of the long working hours of their respective working organization. In most of these cases, people spend more hours in the office and they would be incredibly tired by the time they come to the home and hence they would tend to avoid any physical exercises. Additionally, some people opt to work on weekends to earn extra bucks to satisfy their ever-growing demand of human needs by neglecting physical workouts. Also, many people feel lethargy to have any fitness goals as they tend to believe that exercise is an intricate job.
It is essential to work out some practical solutions in order to effectively address the issue. One way this can be done is by reducing the working hours of the company. Another solution could be encouraging sports for working professionals in the work location. Nowadays it is widely accepted that playing sports is crucial for physiological and as well as psychological wellbeing of the individual. Additionally, the government should improve the programs to create awareness of the healthy lifestyle for their citizens.
To sum up, everyone agrees that health is the biggest asset one can have. It is essential to be healthy as it is rightly said that ‘A sound mind lives in a sound body’. Hence, the physical workout should not be neglected and various timely measures should be opted to mitigate the problem.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 49, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'given the least'.
Suggestion: given the least
... no denying of the fact that health was given least importance by the people nowadays. This...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, well, as well as, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00337837838 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74282507464 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550675675676 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.9506616131 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.1176470588 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4117647059 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.82352941176 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330000517797 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930707209724 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661488210963 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174075614771 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485917512314 0.056905535591 85% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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