Education is the most important part of our life and parents have been playing a pivotal role to educate the children. Also, at the dawn of civilization, it becomes a necessity for the parents to educate their children. Some argue that parents do not give attention to their children's education today than before. While others have the opposite idea that parents have more concern for their children's studies at present days. From my perspective, the latter view carries more weight. I take the position on account for the following reasons.
Primarily, in the twenty-first century, everything has been changed gradually with time. There is no doubt that today, parents are more educated than in the past and it is the one reason that the children are provided with all the required facilities for their education. For instance, when I was in the high school, my parents have tried their best to provide all the necessary facilities which I wanted for my education and thereby, I could be able to finish my graduation with good grades. On the other side, my mother was forced to leave her education in high school because my grandfather studied till grade 4th and could not realize the importance of education at that time. Thus, parents assist their children in their education and provide a suitable life required for their studies.
Furthermore, nowadays, people are aware of the importance of education. Our grandparents did not complete their education and that is the reason, they did not give much preference to the education. On the other hand, today, most of the parents are educated, so they know that giving education to their children is crucial to compete in very high competitions. For instance, my father used to tell me that his grandfather did not aware about his education and my grandfather has never helped my father in his homework or assignments. However, nowadays, it is quite common that parents spend their time with children in order to give them proper guidance for education.
Finally, at the dawn of technological development, the competitions among children have been increased in order to get good grades in the schools and the universities. Parents have already gone through the same situation so; they can guide their children in a better way. Also, they do not want their children would face any difficulties in searching for a job in the future. Therefore, they always try to support their children in a matter of education.
To sum up, because of increasing awareness, educated parents, and the good economic and social situations, parents of today are taking better care of their kids’ education than parents in the past.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, for instance, no doubt, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 43.0788530466 123% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 52.1666666667 117% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.0752688172 334% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2232.0 1977.66487455 113% => OK
No of words: 444.0 407.700716846 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02702702703 4.8611393121 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73530634843 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 212.727598566 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475225225225 0.524837075471 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 701.1 618.680645161 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.94265232975 162% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 20.6003584229 102% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9126171812 48.9658058833 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.285714286 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.6045352989 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.47619047619 5.45110844103 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 11.8709677419 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221120660344 0.236089414692 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0831650051402 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071837452013 0.0737576698707 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155587222857 0.150856017488 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0715828781173 0.0645574589148 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 58.1214874552 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.01818996416 97% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 86.8835125448 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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