a local magazine editor has asked for readers opinion. Write a letter to magazine editor;
1- Describe what made you choose this magazine
2- What do you like and dislike about it
3- What improvement do you want to see
Dear Madam,
I am one of your sincere magazine’s fans. I have been reading your Women’s Beauty and Fashion magazine for almost 10 years now.
I work as a tailor and my costumers usually choose their models out of your magazines. So that, I could follow your attached patterns and duplicate the model. That is why I keep all the previous editions and curious for the coming.
What makes your magazine special and unique is the sophisticated taste of your models. Also, the variety of sections that cover essentials topics for your lady followers.
However, I do not appreciate your cover model’s girl. You tend to choose only super models with slim bodies and perfect look to be photographed for your cover picture.
I hope in the future you could keep up the excellent work and to manage introducing more women’s concerning problems.
Also, looking forward that you apply diversity while choosing your cover model in order to represent the women in all its shapes, color and appearance without limiting the woman’s beauty with being thin and slim.
Your faithfully,
Sarah Smith
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 940.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16483516484 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74953751147 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.8618248997 44.8134815571 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.3333333333 76.5299724578 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1666666667 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125212621326 0.216113520407 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476195878038 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0341328856247 0.0603063233224 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0693562565632 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025153544649 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 7.59969072165 120% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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