Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
it is often argued that people should play safe of take risks when they meet a twist in life. While there are some certain advantages by avoiding changes, I'm in the opinion that facing problems is the key to be innovative which will be outlined in my essay below.
On one hand, it is natural that people are afraid of changes. By repeating same things over and over again provides them a comfort zone which can hardly step out. Thus, it also gives confidence after completing tasks and receives satisfaction in one's line of thinking. Although the disadvantages of this tendency are varied. For instance, a country refuses to integrate into the globalization, will get behind others instantly. take Sabeco group for example, over decades being a leader in beverages industry, they do not find changing their machines and management is necessary which leads to their failure in the future and lose the brand to Thailand company. Moreover, stop moving forward can make our minds and logical strategies dull and by the time we cross at problems demand solutions, we could not think of a better way out.
On the other hand, opposing to those who fear, revolution has played a vital role in success. The one who thinking out of the box can create new ideas to make a fortune. Clearly, started from a single idea of Steve Jobs and he decided to persuade his invention for the development of smartphone today. Furthermore, this contributes much to the breakthroughs in scientific and pharmaceuticals like vaccine against many kind of diseases, saving millions of lives.
In conclusion, I can say without hesitating that the merits of renovation are greater than drawbacks, therefore we should not run away but to accept as a way to develope.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1444.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89491525424 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75302241785 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.674576271186 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2466201057 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.142857143 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10033940763 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0263281799756 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282646877264 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0460918093619 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041307447314 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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