Many people are choosing to find information online rather than in books. Is this development positive or negative?
In our modern world, Many people prefer accessing to information via internet than by books. In my opinion, I think this is could be seen as positive trend and my reasons will be further explained in this essay.
To begin with, presence of online platforms has become a flexible tool for finding information easily and accurately. First ,people now are just click away from what they want to know, compared to the past where they was searching hours and hours in libraries to get the knowledge. Secondly, anyone can browse a number of websites at the same time for the same aim, such that they are able to not only access their desired data quickly but with a high level of accuracy.
In addition, another explain why finding information by internet becomes more preferable than other traditional ways is the low - cost of internet service. In the mean time , buying books for general knowledge or for research purposes could cost too much unlike surfing internet which could be considered an affordable way in many countries. In other words, many well-known websites such as Google and Wikipedia can replace a great library for availability a great deal of knowledge with little cost which is incomparable with the great benefits it bring
In conclusion, it seems to me that surfing internet to get any information has many benefits starting from the ease and accuracy of getting information to the ability to pay by this method.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, well, i think, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 243.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91769547325 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62857142857 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.5161303503 49.4020404114 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.375 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.375 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.25 7.06120827912 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203840059415 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0921689028262 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745122977979 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128811704542 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678059301167 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.85 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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