The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Maintaining world peace by using threatening of nuclear weapons and the subject of providing cheap and clean energy thanks to nuclear power is a controversy. Whereas some people support this type of energy by ignoring its disadvantages, I totally disagree. Because it can cause nonrecoverable problems such as eradication of mankind and destruction of the planet.
First of all, to believe that using nuclear weapons by powerful countries against another powerful ones as a threat just for keeping world peace is totally unwisely. Because some countries’ having nuclear weapon leaders can be rogue and intend to use this power against its enemy. For example North Korean leader gave a speech and threatened to USA with using their nuclear weapons against it and he added that they was continuing to produce those nuclear warhead that can reach all over the USA. This was a literally insane explanation and at this circumstances, no one can say that these nuclear weapons are tools keeping the world safe.
Secondly, although some people claim that nuclear power is the by for the best and cheap way to produce high energy, drawbacks are so serious and those can bring unavoidable problems such as nuclear leakage. Even though nowadays some countries declare that they are using high technology and there is no chance any leakage in nuclear plants, people understood that nuclear power will never be reliable when they saw what happened in Fukusima, japan. In Japan in 2011, leakage began in nuclear power plants because of the earthquake and tsunami, thus there was numerous casualty. To make matters worse, this radioactive materials was transferring by clouds so, with this event entire Europe was under danger. Everyone knows that Japan is the highest technological country in the world but this occasion told us that even though a country has highest technology, they can not be able to prevent dangerous of nuclear power.
Last but not least, nuclear power is not cheapest and cleanest energy as claimed by some people. Nowadays, I firmly believe that the most useful and clean energy is renewable energy sources such as wind power etc. Therefore, nowadays countries that is showed between the best economic position such as Germany, China, and Japan are closing their nuclear power plants one by one and producing their energy from other renewable sources. This kind of changes show us nuclear energy is not essential and clean to produce energy, thus, some powerful countries go towards another source of energy.
To sum up, people do not need to use nuclear energy and weapons. This is because, if nuclear weapons use by someone, there would not be any living in the world because of the effect of this power, also nuclear energy has a source of many damaging material producing radioactive energy and there is always a danger for spreading of those materials to over the world accidentally.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, whereas, for example, kind of, such as, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 24.0 7.0 343% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 20.0 6.8 294% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 5.60731707317 731% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2440.0 965.302439024 253% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 479.0 196.424390244 244% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09394572025 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.67825486995 3.73543355544 125% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57070296525 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 106.607317073 216% => Less unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.480167014614 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 762.3 283.868780488 269% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 8.94146341463 201% => Too many sentences.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.2909726904 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.555555556 112.824112599 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6111111111 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.23603664747 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 1.13902439024 966% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330150107684 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12845721343 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0872293499691 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211887801146 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298592966541 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 61.2550243902 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 40.7170731707 263% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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