The chart below shows the annual water usage by different industries.
This given bar chart illustrates information on the annual water use by several factories such as textiles, paper, chemicals, metal, machinery, food and drink and fuel in millions of cubic metres.
There is two ways to use water as public supply and ground water. As for the textiles and fuel industries, they usage 10 millions of cubic metres water in public supply, whilst paper factory use 20 millions of cubic meters water. However, some industries such as metal(90M), machinery(100M), food and drink (190M), and chemicals (240M) are using highest millions of cubic meters water from public supply.
On the contrary, machinery is only industry that depend on public supply water than ground water, it is 10M. Textiles and fuel factories use ground water less than other industries. However, food and drink (110M), paper (190M), metal(240M) water using, but chemicals factories use ground water more than other industries, that is 430M
Overall, chemicals factories are using highest water from public supply and ground water, while other factories such as textiles, paper, metal, food and drink and fuel use ground water than public supply water. Only, machinery industry use water from public supply water than ground water.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 118, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '10 million'.
Suggestion: 10 million
...extiles and fuel industries, they usage 10 millions of cubic metres water in public supply, wh...
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Line 2, column 195, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '20 million'.
Suggestion: 20 million
...public supply, whilst paper factory use 20 millions of cubic meters water. However, some indus...
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Line 2, column 332, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the highest'.
Suggestion: using the highest
... and drink 190M, and chemicals 240M are using highest millions of cubic meters water from pub...
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Line 4, column 34, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'using the highest'.
Suggestion: using the highest
... 430M Overall, chemicals factories are using highest water from public supply and ground wat...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, while, as for, such as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 6.8 176% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 33.7804878049 41% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25128205128 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34850519695 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446153846154 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 301.5 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.8690678944 43.030603864 211% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 128.0 112.824112599 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.375 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 5.23603664747 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203241061758 0.215688989381 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122809938313 0.103423049105 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339740658417 0.0843802449381 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145245371219 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0134162743444 0.0819641961636 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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