You are working for a company. You need to take some time off work and want to ask your manager about this.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
explain why you want to take time off work
give details of the amount of time you need
suggest how your work could be covered while you are away
Dear Mr. Watson,
My name is Jocelyn Mascarenhas and the purpose of writing this letter is to ask for permission for a few days of holiday.
First of all, as you already know, I am preparing for English Proficiency test (IELTS), which has been made mandatory if i want a hike in salary. I have been practicing it for a couple of days now but it is very difficult to concentrate in this hustle and bustle and whenever I try to practice, most during break times, my colleague try to chat up and I end up socializing with them out of courtesy. This exam is really important for me, not only for a brighter future. But also to broaden my horizons.
If a leave can be granted for a couple of days, it would be really appreciated. To be precise, my exam is on 13th September. So, a leave from Monday (25th August) till the exam would be sufficient enough.
If you permit me this study leave from Monday, I would have 3 days to explain my work and duties to any of the employees. I would personally like to suggest one name, Mr. Jack Bethoz. He is a close friend of mine and he already knows half of my work. So it will be a smooth transition and my absence would not be missed. He is also known as 'Jack of all trades'. I am sure he will quickly grasp and learn the traits. If needed, I will be a phone call away in case of any trouble or emergency.
Thanking you for your consideration.
Yours faithfully,
Jocelyn Mascarenhas.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 120, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...IELTS, which has been made mandatory if i want a hike in salary. I have been prac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, really, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.48453608247 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 937.175257732 124% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31851851852 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59534245701 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 127.690721649 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574074074074 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 290.88556701 124% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0590475576 44.8134815571 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5882352941 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8823529412 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.70588235294 4.34317383033 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144428486973 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518457120978 0.0766984524023 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789244139579 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929172355603 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103079002795 0.0580467560999 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.48 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.