You recently moved to a new house and you want to invite an old friend to stay with you. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
invite him to stay and suggest a date
briefly describe the new house and garden
say why you like your new house
Dear Jimmy,
It's been such a long time since I heard from you. I hope you are in pink of your health. I just moved to a new place and I was thinking if you were interested to shift in with me.
The last time we met, we had a talk that you were fed up with your neighbors and that you wanted to get out of that place. Since the house I'm moving in has a spare bedroom, why don't you come and stay with me? The room needs a bit of furnishing but it would just take a couple of weeks. So how about you move in with me by the end of the month?
The house I have taken on lease is a villa and it has 2 bedrooms facing the beach so I'm sure you would enjoy the view from the balcony. It also has a jacuzzi in the backyard and there is a small garden where we can barbeque during weekends.
The reason why I fell in love with this place is because of the location and how well-planned it is. When you enter inside, it is very spacious and it has all the modern amenities. Even the kitchen there is modular which I'm sure you would adore.
Let me what you plan. Hoping to hear back from you soon.
Yours lovingly,
Kith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 3.95614035088 4.54256449028 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.95751662701 2.54303337028 77% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587719298246 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 276.3 290.88556701 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 4.0 0.824742268041 485% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5469157383 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.1333333333 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.53333333333 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.342943123034 0.216113520407 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115165703721 0.0766984524023 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697955124427 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181708849341 0.12726935374 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0765487364239 0.0580467560999 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.8 8.37731958763 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 5.1 8.71597938144 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.18 7.59969072165 81% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.