In some countries, people move abroad for their work. They have to leave their family and friends. Do you think the benefits of this outweigh drawbacks?
~In this cut-throat era, more and more people migrate in other nation for their job opportunities and due to this they have to stay away from their kith and keens. I reckon, that working in other countries brings about more drawbacks compare to any benefits it brings.
~ To commence with,the reason why people are settling in other nation is that they can have better job opportunities in their respective fields which also gives them a handsome salary. Because of this,they are able to fulfil their need of their native language members living in the home country. In other words, they can provided all the amenities to their family. To illustrate, during the early 90's ,many Indians settled down in Dubai to get high remuneration.
~ on the other hand,this phenomenon leads to many detrimental outcome. Almost them,the paramount demirit is that people became home sick. After a while, they start missing their family and even new technology cannot aid in this situation as it lacks the human interaction. It ultimately leads to a drop in efficiency in work rate which is mostly evident during festival seasons.
~ Secondly , another major drawback is the language barrier for some migrants.If the native language is not learnt by them,they face a huge conundrum in their day-to-day life as well as at their work place .Moreover, racism cases have been augmenting dramatically due to the shortage of jobs. People there have to compete with the immigrants which might creat a hostile atmosphere that might lead to a chaos.To examplify, African people mostly have to face this trouble.
~ In recapitulation, even though the craze to settle down in a foreign is on the rise, I believe that, the loneliness and the other problem people face in those countries clearly outweighs it's benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...even though the craze to settle down in a foreign is on the rise, I believe that the lone...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, i reckon, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63503813479 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58389261745 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.1224687675 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341806565192 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.098470217152 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607979812825 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177289481621 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688409505626 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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