Some young children spend an enormous amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
As everything in life is like a coin that has two different sides, people must weigh the pros and cons before jumping into conclusions. Nevertheless, some may firmly believe that encouraging kids to spare most of their time to play games; others will think that such actions may lead to have a great impact on the future. This essay will be discussing both the views.
To start with, most of the people would agree with the notion that playing games is beneficial, especially in their childhood. The main reason for praising this option is to stay fit physically and mentally. According to a recent study published in the New England Journal of medicine in 2018, children who spend more than ten hours in a week by exercising either indoor or outdoor activities tend to grow faster and become less vulnerable to acquiring diseases. For instance, most of the famous athletes started practicing sports at an early age which moulded them to become professionals. For example, Rafael Nadal - tennis champion, began his journey in the sports world started to practice from the age of six, he played different games until he realized that tennis is his passion.
On the other hand, exercising to the core can sometimes be harmful. To begin with, by spending most of their time playing, children will not have enough time for studying which in turn affects their performance. Moreover, injury rates are higher among over-active kids. Take my brother as an example; he suffered from multiple fractures during his boyhood while doing Karate. As a result, his absence during elementary school increased significantly and could not compensate what he missed and ended up with deficient grades.
In conclusion, however playing sports more extended periods improves the stability, concentration power in the individuals and the career pathway of youngsters. Failure to manage between practicing and resting could lead to severe after-effects such as bad performance in school and may accidentally increase the risk of injuries. In this computerized world, we are more concerned about children being sticking inside the home and not interested in a variety of physical activities. In my opinion, it is advisable to always balance between practicing and relaxing to overcome any hurdles in their way.
- Some young children spend an enormous amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 89
- Some young children spend an enormous amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 89
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home: 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18059299191 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.800523133 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638814016173 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 588.6 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.902690425 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.058823529 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5294117647 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144758328762 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414140326927 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0403830955978 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0818710607304 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00779641627532 0.056905535591 14% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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