Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home:
By making best use of technology, flexible working such as work-from-home has become possible. Elderly workers as they approach retirement, young people who want to study while they work and women who have children to take care-of are especially benefited from this option. However, there are benefits and drawbacks in opting for this facility. In this essay, I will be discussing both advantages and disadvantages with relevant examples.
Talking about the advantages first, one of the most positives is that you have freedom. That is to say, you don't have to bury your nose in strangers' armpits on crowded trains instead you can unwind on sofa and work in leisure suit at home. Undeniably, it can create good work and life balance. Another tangible benefit is the potential to save money in terms of office space, which is one of the biggest overheads for small and medium-sized businesses. In other words, the rising cost of office spaces eats into company profits. One less work station could mean one step closer towards moving to smaller site.
Turning to the other side of the argument, one of the major drawbacks is that you are less likely promoted since companies still reward the availability. What I mean by this is that, managers often rate those who are in office are more dependable and industrious, regardless of their quality-work and efforts. For instance, being last one to leave the office impresses bosses even if you are larking around on Facebook. Another potential drawback is the time spent during travel. Stress due to long travel will play a vital role by impacting your productivity. Emotionally, how strong will be your marriage if you see your partner for just 3 days 4 nights a week? And a voice on phone for a few minutes is no substitute for the family time.
To sum it up, there are clearly positives and negatives when you select the of working from home option. It is purely based on the individuals priority and preference. Personally I believe that it is not an easy option after considering the after-effects.
- Some young children spend an enormous amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 89
- Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home: 89
- Some young children spend an enormous amount of their time practicing sports. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 4, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'making the best'.
Suggestion: making the best
By making best use of technology, flexible working suc...
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Line 2, column 108, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...t you have freedom. That is to say, you dont have to bury your nose in strangers arm...
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Line 4, column 131, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
... home option. It is purely based on the individuals priority and preference. Personally I b...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, still, while, for instance, i mean, such as, talking about, in other words, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 7.48453608247 267% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.03092783505 330% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 26.3917525773 186% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1724.0 937.175257732 184% => OK
No of words: 345.0 206.0 167% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99710144928 4.54256449028 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 3.78020617076 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00374897029 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 127.690721649 169% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626086956522 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 290.88556701 188% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.5222175211 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7777777778 76.5299724578 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1666666667 16.8248392259 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 4.34317383033 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235587304846 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649953387608 0.0766984524023 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0887560860769 0.0603063233224 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147691221977 0.12726935374 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110211432608 0.0580467560999 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 8.37731958763 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 8.71597938144 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 41.2886597938 199% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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