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My diverse experiences in painting, calligraphy and piano aroused my passion for art and prompted me to explore edges and boundaries in this challenging realm. I intend to further my interdisciplinary adventure in arts at the School of the Art Institute of Chicago to broaden my horizon and gain practical experience in nonprofit art organizations, with the goal of preparing myself as a well-trained practitioner in art museums.
The undergraduate training in arts administration helped me gain insight into the underpinnings and nuances of the art world. Courses such as History of Chinese and We...
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Score: 6.0 out of 6
Category: Excellent Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 28 15
No. of Words: 756 350
No. of Characters: 4170 1500
No. of Different Words: 398 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 5.244 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.516 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.271 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 345 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 293 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 224 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 155 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 27 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.202 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.179 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.489 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.081 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5