In some countries, increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast foods. Therefore, government should impose higher taxes in this kind of food. Do you agree/ disagree.
Due to urbanization and exposure to multiple cuisines, people are inclining more towards junk food which is prone to many health ailments. Some people are of the opinion that as these foods is unhealthy, government should also impose strict taxes against them. I completely accord with this statement.
There are umpteen factors why high authorities should levy taxes on fast foods. Firstly, these foods have a huge amount of toxic ingredients like Mono sodium glutamate, palm oil which makes these foods feel good on tongue, so people consume high amounts of these foods which results in genetic disorders in children. For instance, reports have shown Maggi has more than triple amount of allowed lead and children love eating Maggi on daily basis which results in multiple disorders in them on later stages. High consumption of fast foods leads to obesity and as we all know obese people suffer from heart, liver and kidney disorders like cardiac arrest, kidney stones, liver failure etc. For example, In America, plethora of people is suffering from obesity and heart diseases and the reason is excessive consumption of fast-food in their daily routine. Another reason is that if there is high taxes on these food, their prices will increase and people will not able to afford it easily. As a result, their consumption will decrease automatically.
However fast foods are dangerous, green vegetables are not safe either. Due to excessive use of pesticides and fertilizers while growing crops, people who consume fruits and green vegetables also suffer from health problems. For example, In India, myriad people are suffering from genetic disorders as farmers use pesticides and fertilizers in their fields and sometimes they inject artificial colors in fruits to grow them quickly.
To encapsulate, although enormous intake of fast-food is dangerous and there will<span class="hiddenGrammarError" pre="there "></span> strict measures to restrict their consumption, government first make sure that the other means of food like green vegetables and fruits are also safe to consume.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 904, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...eason is that if there is high taxes on these food, their prices will increase and people ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1784.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43902439024 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13170161841 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55487804878 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.5918137848 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.428571429 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4285714286 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2399283519 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089134771611 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0468620844557 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138417061255 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580417617918 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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