Many people play sport when they are young, but then stop doing physical exercise when they become adults.
Why do so many adults stop doing physical exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Sports and Physical exercise play a very important role in our day to day life. Individuals of a young age are more inclined towards sports whereas while becoming adults Physical exercise becomes of less importance. The reasons for refraining adults from doing physical exercise could be divided into three factors. One is Time and the second could be a personal reason or Interest.
Firstly, Time can the most relevant and foremost reason. Our super-speed life does not give us ample or a little time to involve ourselves in physical exercise. Researchers have shown that time has been a very important factor for not allowing individuals to take some time out for their physical activity. We are working in the offices which are so far away that we spend most of our time travelling or we are occupied in household activities which do not give us time for the activity. Due to this, one is more prone to diseases like obesity, high cholesterol levels, Diabetes and many more.
Secondly, Even if we get time for one, we do not have much interest in doing physical activity or involving ourselves in sports. Like many people have a hobby of sleeping or playing video games or spend time on social media. These individuals do not like getting themselves involved in sports or and outdoor activity. It is one's personal interest also which drives one to involve in the physical activity.
To conclude with the solutions, we can have gyms at the office; the offices can keep organizing outdoor sports for their employees. They can also tie-ups with the local gyms or nearby clubs of their office to render some discounts for their employees. The government can also participate by organising gym equipment in the public parks or opening conventional centres at subsidized rates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92666666667 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62131434378 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9808408537 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.375 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229147046345 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0786349244243 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576009526432 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144184550485 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0826588646271 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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