An increasing number of individuals in developing nations are buying cars for the first time. The main problem of this cause is lack of parking places and the most viable solution is a public awareness campaign to encourage them to use of public transports.
The principal problem associated with increase in purchase of four wheelers is limited geographical area. This is to say that we cannot enlarge the size of earth for fulfilling the need of parking spaces in locality. Due to narrow spaces in houses, people have to park their motorcars in front of their houses, which leads to heavy traffic jams on roads. For example, Times of India reported that Delhi city in India, 90% people have their own cars which they park in front of their houses which lead to traffic jams on roads.
To tackle this problem the government should launch the publicity campaign in the media and in societies to educate people about difficulties of owing excessive amount of vehicles. Many men and women are buying it for easy commuting, however, they do not understand negative phenomena of this problem. Therefore, by education, they can be motivated to use public transport so that problem of parking spaces could be tackled. For instance, a recent government survey found that 30% of people in India are mitigating the purchase of cars by getting awareness from TV commercials.
In conclusion, majority of people in different countries are purchasing new cars is a major issue that can result in people having less space to park, and they have to use public roads for it which is the prominent reason of heavy congestion. However, it can be addressed through educating people about the dangers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 129, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and in societies to educate people about difficulties of owing excessive amount o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1410.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96478873239 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62188498921 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542253521127 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.7439474492 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.5 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6666666667 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.25 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209176310303 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0804765400491 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0432830226384 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135978570714 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0372577691679 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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