average monthly expenditure by British households

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average monthly expenditure by British households

The bar chart illustrates the typical amount of money spent every month on utility bills, transport, rent, entertainment and groceries by households in Britain in 3 years (1990, 2000 and 2010). Units are measured in pounds sterling.
Overall, there was an upward trend in utility bills, transport, rent and groceries but expenditure of entertainment slightly dropped. The British spent most money on rent. However, they spent least in utility bills (1990 and 2000) and entertainment (2010).
In term of utility bills, transport and rent, there was a significant change in 3 years. The average monthly expenditure by utility bills started at the lowest which was just about 80 pounds increasing marginally to slightly below 100 pounds before surge to 150 pounds. With transport, the year 2000 saw a jump by 40 pounds from 180 pounds to approximately 220 pounds and then it negibably rose by about 10 pounds. British people spent most money on rent and they spent more and more in these 3 years. It started at 450 pounds going up to dramatically over 500 pounds before reaching at the peak at 600 pounds.
On the other hand, the expenditure of entertainment and groceries did not change to much. In term of entertainment after money spent stood in stability in over 100 pounds in 1990 and 2000, it little bit went down to 100 pounds. In contrast, money spent on groceries grown slightly from about 310 pounds to 320 pounds and then it stabilized in that number in the 2 years (2000 and 2010).

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...itish spent most money on rent. However, they spent least in utility bills 1990 a...
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...rm of utility bills, transport and rent, there was a significant change in 3 year...
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...ertainment and groceries did not change to much. In term of entertainment after mo...
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Suggestion: little; bit
...in over 100 pounds in 1990 and 2000, it little bit went down to 100 pounds. In contrast, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, then, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 33.7804878049 160% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 255.0 196.424390244 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82745098039 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68050044964 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 106.607317073 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.482352941176 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 333.9 283.868780488 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.1062000467 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6923076923 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6153846154 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15384615385 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121601857779 0.215688989381 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462566353343 0.103423049105 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553044765687 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0773350207396 0.15604864568 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028185434851 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.2329268293 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.06136585366 81% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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