Nowadays, the most of people are living in the big rural areas. While some individuals Iive with prosperity in these cities but on the other hand, many urban dwellers are faced a lot of pernicious problems. In my perspective, the government should use the better measures to ease the aforementioned difficulties. To embark with, there are a lot of problems which create a trouble among the rural people. During to this, the violent crimes are also a major problems in the large cities so that the culprit and criminals can get more anonymity in these cities. Furthermore, the environment pollution are also a big issue due to this greenhouse emissions are raised in a higher terms. To cite an example, the global warming as well as the higher amount of carbon - dioxide relate problems are mostly occurred in the big rural areas. Consequently, it make people 's life more tensionful as well as stressful. Moving ahead, the government should take steps to reduce these harmful problems. During to this, the government should change the migration of some people from the large rural cities to the small towns. As long as, the government should also improve the development facilities in the small areas. For instance, the infrastructure policies like transportation, large number of universities and schools should be given to the individuals so that they can gain the more employment opportunities. Therefore, these solutions are more beneficial to tackle the specific problems.
To recapitulate, I think that the government should make the policies to control the criminal activities. Moreover, they should also try to lead a better life for the rural people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i think, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12177121771 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94153490463 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535055350554 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.1726723124 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0666666667 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301712778058 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0959064631992 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649353930104 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195452602144 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114481587356 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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