The concept that majorily considers the combination of technology becoming more popular because it becomes a first and last step to complete every work upto an end point such as tracking through phones and CCTV cameras which finally provide hands to obviate the people from the sobering problems which mainly cover the crime criterias.
To commence with, the secureness can make the life of individuals more easier which can not be impossible through the high technology. As, the experts are organized by the main authorities who continuously try to watch the illegal activities of culprits. For instance, the censorship board is putting a lot of efforts to create the mandatory laws so that these laws can perfectly provide the basic protection to the citizens of country from the malpractices which are constantly doing by the fake personalities.
In addition to this, distinct types of cameras are used in the large locations as well as in the ordinary offices. During this time, the owners can easily take care of their products which are placed on their workshops coupled with it can capture every moment of people not only in a day time but also in the night scenario. For example, a survey was conducted by the researchers which showed, the people were preferring to adopt the area of technology to protect themselves but sometimes it can spoil the privacy of individuals.
To conclude, its drawbacks do not outweigh the benefits of technology. Although, a few people are not aware about this phenomenon, but still the government should generate other regulations to ameliorate the safetyness of individuals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 67, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...reness can make the life of individuals more easier which can not be impossible through the...
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Line 3, column 136, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...impossible through the high technology. As, the experts are organized by the main ...
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Line 5, column 406, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...he researchers which showed, the people were preferring to adopt the area of technology to prot...
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Line 7, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ple are not aware about this phenomenon, but still the government should generate...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1360.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1320754717 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83309536272 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62641509434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2744028339 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.111111111 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4444444444 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8888888889 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178815312832 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.066025187548 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0289432957027 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0978624019665 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0182410319153 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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