You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
• State what your skills and experience are.
• Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long.
Dear Sir,
I am Alex Jhonson, student of North California University, pursing Masters in Environmental Science. I recently saw your advertisement inviting applications for unpaid community services in developing nations. I am keen on joining your program and thereby sharing a few details related to my work experience and interests.
My coursework, demands submission of project work dedicated towards voluntary services performed for the benefits of the society. Henceforth, I am volunteering with an objective to gain practical experience.
I am confident of conversing in Hindi language, which I learnt while I was pursing my graduation on humanitarian studies. Besides the bilingual skill, I have prior background in handling assignment on water restoration with focus towards resolving issues associated with irrigation.
Considering the fact that I am well-versed in Hindi language, I would prefer working in India. Additionally, the country is rain-fed, which further inclines me towards choosing the country for my intended activity. Assuming the time required for plantation and harvesting of crop, time span of 6 months will be sufficient.
Looking forward for your response.
Yours Faithfully,
Alex Jhonson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 211, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...mmunity services in developing nations. I am keen on joining your program and the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, if, look, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1060.0 937.175257732 113% => OK
No of words: 181.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85635359116 4.54256449028 129% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.26702045711 2.54303337028 128% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.690607734807 0.622605031667 111% => OK
syllable_count: 317.7 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.41237113402 127% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.764177453 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3333333333 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0833333333 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.41666666667 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0792376685948 0.216113520407 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0301670503113 0.0766984524023 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0221286311762 0.0603063233224 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417618420649 0.12726935374 33% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0167354780027 0.0580467560999 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 8.37731958763 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 70.7449484536 56% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.12 8.71597938144 185% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.01 7.59969072165 145% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 41.2886597938 184% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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