You live in an English speaking country and you want to do some voluntary, unpaid work in a developing country. Write a letter to a company called Cultural Expeditions, which organizes such trips. In your letter:
• Explain why you want to do the voluntary work.
• State what your skills and experience are.
• Indicate where you would like to volunteer and for how long
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to request volunteering opportunity in the field of teaching english for secondary schoolers in India. it would be suitable if it lasts for six months or less, starting from next August.
The reasons behind my decision is to have a unique experience by dealing with a totally different culture, and as a part of my master's research in education in developing countries. Furthermore, I choose India specifically because of rich culture and special lifestyle of its citizens, also because of its historical places that would make my journey more interesting.
This new experience will affect my CV positively, as I have been working as English teacher for three years. Although it is not my first language, but I have lived here in London since 2008. Additionally, my bachelor degree in linguistics alongside with my recent IELTS score, which is a band 8, can make me suitable for such a job.
Thank you for your consideration, and I am waiting for your respond to my request.
Yours faithfully,
Sara Eltantawy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 897.0 937.175257732 96% => OK
No of words: 176.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09659090909 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97809127367 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.698863636364 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6276711768 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 76.5299724578 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0816302987172 0.216113520407 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0354543505059 0.0766984524023 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0290265309318 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0527790484504 0.12726935374 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339265692593 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 7.59969072165 123% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 8.62886597938 139% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.