U stayed at your friend's house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend:
Describe the file
Ask him to return it to you by post
Ask him about the approximate cost of sending the documents.
Dear Suzan,
I hope you're fine. thank you for the amazing time that I spent with you in your house during my visit to Australia. While I was packing my bags, I forgot an important file in the room which I was staying in. Could you please check for it in the room where I was sleeping?
Let me describe it to ease your job. Its a yellow plastic A4 folder, contains five papers from the seminar. it might be on the commode next to the bed, or maybe I slipped under the chair.
When you find it, please send it to my address via Aramex post. I think I'd seen an office for them near to your home. Just give them my full name because I already have a profile with them, which contains all my information.
after submitting the sending order, they will ask you for the fees. you'll tell them that I'll pay after receiving the document. But I don't really know how much they might ask for, as it depends on the weight of the package, so can you please check for the average price for such a service and tell me?
thanks again for all your support, and can't wait tell we meet again.
yours,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Suzan, I hope youre fine. thank you for the amazing time th...
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Line 5, column 20, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thank
Dear Suzan, I hope youre fine. thank you for the amazing time that I spent w...
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Line 5, column 273, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or it in the room where I was sleeping? Let me describe it to ease your job. Its...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
... Let me describe it to ease your job. Its a yellow plastic A4 folder, contains fi...
^^^
Line 9, column 109, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
... contains five papers from the seminar. it might be on the commode next to the bed...
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Line 13, column 73, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
... to my address via Aramex post. I think Id seen an office for them near to your ho...
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Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: After
...hich contains all my information. after submitting the sending order, they will...
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Line 17, column 69, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Youll
... order, they will ask you for the fees. youll tell them that Ill pay after receiving ...
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Line 17, column 69, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you'll
... order, they will ask you for the fees. youll tell them that Ill pay after receiving ...
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Line 17, column 134, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...pay after receiving the document. But I dont really know how much they might ask for...
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Line 21, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Thanks
...e for such a service and tell me? thanks again for all your support, and cant wa...
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Line 21, column 40, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... thanks again for all your support, and cant wait tell we meet again. yours, ...
^^^^
Line 25, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Yours
...and cant wait tell we meet again. yours, Sara
^^^^^
Line 25, column 7, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt wait tell we meet again. yours, Sara
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, may, really, so, while, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 211.0 206.0 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.31279620853 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00387083021 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 127.690721649 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654028436019 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 263.7 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7134272913 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0714285714 16.8248392259 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.57142857143 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22405334658 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749922619961 0.0766984524023 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683326905983 0.0603063233224 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115533451194 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0808281590245 0.0580467560999 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.33 7.59969072165 83% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 41.2886597938 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 5.0 8.15463917526 61% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.