You stayed at your friends’ house when you participated in a business seminar in Australia. You left a file with important documents in your room. Write a letter to your friend, describing the file and ask him/her to return it to you by post.
My dearest Philip,
I am sorry I am writing only now. Firstly, I would like to thank you for all the attention and support you gave me while I was in Sydney. Things like that are priceless and I feel blessed to have you as my friend. I expect you and Ingrid to come to Rio soon, so that I try to somehow propitiate equally joyful moments as those you propitiated to me. I am also writing because of the fact that I forgot a very important document in the room where I stayed at your house.
The document is a signed contract and was the most important reason for my trip to Australia, after the business seminar I attended. You certainly can imagine how desperate I have been in the last days looking for this document in my luggage. I could not find it anywhere and now I am sure I left it in your house.
Please let me know if you find it, and post it with express delivery as soon as possible. I will pay for the cost; just let me know your bank, account and branch numbers.
With best wishes,
Leonardo
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 369, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ou propitiated to me. I am also writing because of the fact that I forgot a very important document in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, while, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 825.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 195.0 206.0 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23076923077 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32848750123 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605128205128 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6783942326 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.0 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 4.34317383033 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324538917199 0.216113520407 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10791677013 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509872854602 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.201221721813 0.12726935374 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0713216653998 0.0580467560999 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 70.7449484536 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.96 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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