If a goal is worthy, then any means taken to attain it are justifiable.
Everyone have a desire to lead successfull lives.life can be described by different people in various ways and one of the definitions is hunting for success.it is the ultimate purpose that provides satsifaction.Every individual in order to lead a successful life would definitely need a goal.The above statement describes that the means of attaining goal are justifiable if the goal is worthy.As far as i concern,the statemtent is not agreeable because having a worthy goal should be achieved by respective means.
Firstly,consider a typical example of a student who tries to malpractice in examination.The goal is to pass the examination with good grade and this implies there is no doubt in intention of the student.but when the student subjects to malpractice and clears the examination with a distinction,that doesn't justify the purpose.In fact,it is quite immoral and makes the intention desecrate.The path one chooses in reaching the destination is valued in judging whether the goal is worthy or not.
Secondly,the statement that any means of achieving the goal is is the reason today human civilisation suffers from several issues.For instance,consider the governments or auhtorities that got absorbed into deep rooted corruption.People are made to beleive that system is transparent but the politicians ironically manipulate the institutions according to their needs.The ultimate goal of making society a better place is undeniably valuable but they it needs to be attained in a proper unscrupulous manner.
Moreover,the difference between a winner and looser would diminish if the there is no manner that follows ethics and morals.it is basic principle in living a life that is atleast meaningful to you if not for others.
To conclude,it is better to follow a better means of approaching a goal than to achieve it in whatever possible way as it undermines the true purpose.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, in fact, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 58.6224719101 63% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 297.0 442.535393258 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38720538721 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.43873753359 2.79657885939 123% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 23.0359550562 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 158.985030742 60.3974514979 263% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.0 118.986275619 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.4 23.4991977007 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 17.6 5.21951772744 337% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 7.80617977528 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177945018506 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0886618890927 0.0831039109588 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.061058098355 0.0758088955206 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886618890927 0.150359130593 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061058098355 0.0667264976115 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 33.7 14.1392134831 238% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 48.8420337079 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 12.1743820225 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.87 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.51 8.38706741573 137% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 100.480337079 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 11.8971910112 248% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 11.2143820225 228% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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