Many university students live with their families, while others live away from
their home because their universities are in different places. What are the
advantages and disadvantages of both situations?
This essay is about the the advantages and disadvantages of the university students who
live with their families and the ones who live away from their homes because their
universities are in different place. As one can say it isn’t about the where the student lives
but its about the knowledge that they acquire and it is also highly arguable that where the
students live also has many advantages as well as disadvantages. The advantages and
disadvantages of both situations are given below.
The students who live away from their home because their universities are in different
places are having a lot of advantages and it is most suggested by experienced elders that
students should go to different place (away from their homes) to study their higher
education as they will learn a lot of life lessons which isn’t possible to have learned it
while sitting at their homes. One of the biggest advantages is that they learn to live by
themselves and to survive the open world. The disadvantages are that, they don’t get
their emotional support of their loved ones being around them and also that it is also very
easy for them to get into the wrong path in life.
Meanwhile the students who live with their families aren’t experiencing any less, their
advantages are that they have emotional support at the nearest and many more. The
disadvantages are that, their home and family becomes a comfort place and tend relay
more on their family rather than on themselves. In conclusion, I’d like to say that it doesn’t
matter where they live, it matters who they choose to be.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 3.15609756098 570% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 5.60731707317 767% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1361.0 965.302439024 141% => OK
No of words: 272.0 196.424390244 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.00367647059 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.73543355544 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69292122403 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.470588235294 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 428.4 283.868780488 151% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 1.53170731707 457% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.4141489152 43.030603864 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.222222222 112.824112599 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2222222222 22.9334400587 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 19.0 3.83414634146 496% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404405218957 0.215688989381 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181593809785 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136471487349 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139945398516 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139879424915 0.0819641961636 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.2329268293 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 61.2550243902 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 10.3012195122 146% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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