The college years are the best time in a person's life.
Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons to support your opinion.
I agree to the following given statement that is,"The college years are the best time in a person's life. To support the opinion i will explore my reason in the following essay.
The college years make a great difference in a person's life, why i say this is because while schooling being kept in a secured surrounding like under the guidance of teacher and parents, we are now led to the next step of life, where there is no more holding of our backs and letting as in our own will.
My personal experiance of college was an adventurous one, if i start from the very beginning of my college days i had a somany feelings like anxiety, enthusiasism, nervousness,etc,. i was totally in a weird state, the worst was that i was not even sure about the course that it was the right one till i completed my first semester. Later i learnt that im sailing on the right boat and all the mixed feelings of mine change into an energy source of confidence. The place of fear turned out to be a fun groud, life was colorfull during those days, it was all about fun,loving,eating, giggling. Happy days are obiviously the freshes day, cultural events, home coming parties and lot more. Having a gang around us making noise is totally mind blowing things which can be made in those college days only.
The most ineresting part was meeting new people making friends and at a point u have to take a lead part to prove yourself in that vast surrounding. Some days were hard some where gloomy and each day was brought up with a new learning. As a student we all make mistakes and through our mistaes we put ourself in trouble, wherecomes an interesting part, in every single problem i learnt that i have to face them and can not turn my back and keep running from them. That is where this struck on my mind that every problem has a solution and the best helper in troblem for oneself is us only us.
Like wise so many things grew up within me that gave me self confidence knowledge courage independentness and what so more a person would need. I discovered that College life is not only about acedemics but a deep learning of life, which is the only thing a person can get elsewhere. Therefor the most valuable period of one's life is their college years.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, thus, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 13.8261648746 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 51.0 43.0788530466 118% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1835.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.46472019465 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57870814077 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 235.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571776155718 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.1344086022 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.6329983603 48.9658058833 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6875 100.406767564 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6875 20.6045352989 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 5.45110844103 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.5376344086 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183587768639 0.236089414692 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0653052448107 0.076458572812 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862888443685 0.0737576698707 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13454306861 0.150856017488 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118344687343 0.0645574589148 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.1575268817 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 10.9000537634 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 86.8835125448 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.0537634409 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.