Art is considered as an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business.
Why do you think that is?
What can be done to encourage more people to take an interest in the arts?
Nowadays, art is a vital aspect of modern society as well as an expression of different cultures across the globe. Nonetheless, more and more people are referring to science, technology and business. This is because art needs more government funding and promotion in the school curriculum.
First and foremost, the authorities are insufficiently promoting arts and literature by cutting down the budget. As a result, citizens prefer to pursue their interest in fields of science, technology and business as they get better wages in these streams. However, a practical solution would be to give a significant proportion of the assets form the annual budget to support arts and literature. This can motivate the public to professionally develop a career prospect in art streams such as music, drawing and painting. For instance, the Indian government have started constructing museums and art galleries to advertise the importance of creativity among the youth and the grown-ups. Such fairs have encouraged the local artist to improve their talent in the art field, thereby giving employment opportunities.
Another prime reason is that art is discouraged in academic education. The educational board is emphasising more on subjects such as maths, science and computers since these subjects are imperative from job prospects. Nevertheless, an effective measure is to make art as a compulsory subject during school hours. Making art as a mandatory subject in school is likely to help students build creativity and enhance visual learning. For example, researchers of India have published an independent survey stating students, who are more creative and artistic, are better decision makers.
To summarise, art is an indispensable part of any culture and must be encouraged by the government and the learning institutes. This can be achieved by limiting funds from the yearly development bills and making it as a compulsion subject in learning organisations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sion subject in learning organisations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1663.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47039473684 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09406258039 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.5452264376 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.9375 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259031354256 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842799417601 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0483596112028 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159081933953 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388591623201 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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