A restaurant has placed an advertisement for waiters and waitresses in your local newspaper.
Write a letter to the restaurant, applying for the job. In your letter:
• explain what you are currently doing
• describe your suitability for this area of work
• say when you can attend an interview
Dear Sir/Madame,
I put in an application in response to the announcement of vacancy on The City News, published on 25/04/2019 for waitperson in your establishment.
I am 21 years old and I am studying a professional course on Restaurant Management, Technical University. In addition to that, I have done a certification on “Food Safety & Hygiene Practices”. Moreover, my previous employer is closing the business due to their difficult situation. Beside my technical qualifications I have been working here as a server for almost six months. During these days, I have managed to improvise in customer handling & personal hygiene.
I will be grateful, if I have been considered for this position. It will help to mould my skills relevant to the fields. In addition to that, I can use this hands-on experience to perform better in my academics. I can provide a reference letter from my current boss, if requires. I am available any day afternoon, except Monday and Thursday, because my college schedule.
Please let me know, if you want any additional information.
I am eager to receive your feedback
Yours Sincerely,
Thomas Evans
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.85567010309 311% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 973.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 185.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25945945946 4.54256449028 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32785350329 2.54303337028 131% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.686486486486 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3056337252 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8461538462 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2307692308 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.23076923077 4.34317383033 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169631095829 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512871881338 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573895398673 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864060082622 0.12726935374 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466441368102 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 8.37731958763 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 7.45979381443 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 8.71597938144 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 41.2886597938 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.